nell65

I've actually been thinking about how the chapter breaks affect the flow of the story, given that the sections are all much shorter than the new 'chapters' as they appear here. And, since my basic rule, when starting to define breaks, is the maximum voy posting (which is slightly smaller than the maximum lj posting) -- it has been very interesting indeed to see where the breaks fall with that length in mind....and to think about what impact -- if any -- it will have for new readers.

When it's all up - you can tell me what you think about how I should break it up to put it in AO3..... :-)